David asked that we look at the work that he has done on the mural drawing. He planned to explain the concept after we had all looked at it and would take any suggestions or thoughts that we had.
Discussing faith, business, personal finance, news (business and financial related), politics, and pretty much everything else.
Not bad for a start on this...
ReplyDeleteMy suggestions are that this is maybe too personal. And mixing minutes with blog type feelings.
Perhaps it should be more factual and to the point.
As a reader... I don't care for the nit-pickey details. The high level of what you are talking about interests me.
As for personal comments... perhaps create a blog that is about you aand how you feel... then say how you feel. And seperate it from these web pages.
You are presenting this publicly... this is for anyone to comment and read.
My personal advice... make your words short and sweet... you may have to eat them later.
Keep up the good work.